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Web of Suffering |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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In my crepuscular bed of corruption All my minions bow down Under the half life they lead At my beck and call Washed out of any semblance of spirit They are ensnared in blood ties And misplaced loyalty And struggle feebly Fruitlessly To escape my web of power My goad of guilt Leads them to fall at my feet In gratitude that my bitterness Hasn't eaten them alive They have become shadows to my will And my will grows stronger yet As my body fades They will never be free of me I am a victim of circumstance made strong by my design Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
An interesting write, Enjoyable to read. Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (08-12-2002 09:38 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you Gloom, for your interest Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (08-12-2002 09:59 AM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Kethp this has got to be one of your most powerful and strong writes ever. Always your writing is exceptional, in this one you have drawn the picture with frightening power. Yes I love it, as mum would say it is utterly brilliant. Rarely do I get the chance to read something as well written, that you combine the threat and menace so well is a bonus   love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved heart your ability to evoke atmosphere is one of the reasons your writing stands out from others. Where some writers can display your ability to write in perfect-metered rhyme few others can paint the scene so clearly. Even fewer can display your depth of writing skill. You know I positively adore this, it is so brilliantly written and only you could have placed each of the words in this poetic dance of fright. Exquisite darling heart utterly exquisite  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Kethry, yes, always attempt to break free as the web shall loosen itself with the power of faith and the echoes of freedom! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, your words echo and triumph with might, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do like the feel of this Kethry.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Keth...you write as I cannot... I feel you on the other side of the mirror... I am very proud of you... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I am a victim of circumstance made strong by my design An excellent description of the human condition.... I really enjoyed this piece, Keth...  ~ hugs from your chipmunky friendLyra |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmm yea it really engages the mind. i am my own worst enemy. and one day im going to lose this war. spiders.... this is your life. good to the last drop. doesn't get any better than this. |
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