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My Pleasures
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My Pleasures |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Pleasures It pleasures me to kiss your cheek It takes away the gray obelisk It fires up my plains of love It offers me a naked glove. It warms my heart a lonely sail Surceases me a lonesome bale. It makes the waters calm of roll It etches you upon my soul. Its true I’m predigest your fair You are the daughters of my dare. No matter what I’ve done before With age you leave me naught but awe. My heart is subject to your smile I think of you in every wile My shadow echoes by your side It is a truth that I confide. So please forgive my kiss of cheek It takes a moment, just a tweak. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 "a naked glove" Y'my dear...have actually made serenity blush!  *tossing my coffee* "don't need it now!"  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It pleasures me to kiss your cheek It takes away the gray obelisk It fires up my plains of love It offers me a naked glove. It warms my heart a lonely sail Surceases me a lonesome bale. It makes the waters calm of roll It etches you upon my soul. Its true I'm predigest your fair You are the daughters of my dare. No matter what I've done before With age you leave me naught but awe. ================================== Do you prefer the left or right? Which cheek to tweek on a morn so bright This poem could be a problem, to tell the truth... Ron may have to install you a kissing booth The maidens will be lining up when they read this... For who could resist a Randy Dragons kiss? (not i, said the moth) Its true I'm predigest your fair You are the daughters of my dare. yer so Kewwwwl *ww*   and one for Randy... If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is so lovely Sy! And...you may kiss my cheek anytime. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This was wonderful to read first thing this morning... Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Sy, as the first poem I've read today this set a lovely mood for me. Thank you. psssst, I love the use of the word "obelisk" a fascinating word. It plays with the tongue when you say it. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Serenity, JM, Right or left why both of cource. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Enchantress, Thank you love. Marti, Thank you dear. White Rose, Then I throw you an obelick |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ this was a real pleasure to read.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is so lovely. You say things that touch one in ways that they've never been said Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You gather us like flowers as you wile away the hours dreaming weaves of golden spell this, you do, Sire, very well... You sit and speak in mesmerize and cast your charms before our eyes your daughters of rarest poetry are but students meant for thee... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-12-2002 12:50 PM).] |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I have two cheeks!!! Neeraja |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hehehehe those last two lines are absolutely delightful!!! and I love Neeraja's response.LOL Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Thank you dear. Elizabeth, Thank you Sunshine, Neeraja, VAS, :kiss; |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "So please forgive my kiss of cheek It takes a moment, just a tweak" Little girls sometimes fuss when adults make all that fuss but bigger as they get you know a kiss on cheek might make a glow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Exactly, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
your rhyme and time skip hip hops along playful loved enjoyed it syster.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger You mean bam bam thank you mam? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, I believe a kiss on the cheek is a wonderful token of affection in friendship or love, this is a beautiful heartfelt poem! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noal, Enjoy your comments, thank you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeppers.......I would say your plearsures are among the best expressed. Well done sir.....enjoyed much. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It is a pleasure to read your fine poetry, Sy.  ~ hugs from a poetic garden pestLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, My pleasure, thank you friend. Lyra, You are a rodent worth a big hug and |
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