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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-08-11 05:23 PM


I swept the asphalt with my feet
I walked below the silver skies
I turned and faced the wind to plead,
“What do I need, what do I need?”
And it replied, “Her eyes, her eyes...”

I heard the wind and froze in place
The world around me seemed so bleak
I faced the sun and asked, half-dazed,
“What do I seek? What do I seek?”
And it replied, “Her face, her face...”

It seemed my sorrow had no ends
Behind me, gold foliage dragged
I asked the cloud, in a trance,
“What do I lack? What do I lack?”
And it replied, “Her hands, her hands...”

The sky was dark and winds were rough
As lightening struck and thunder groaned
I asked the rain from high above
“What do I want? What do I want?”
And it replied, “Her love, her love...”



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[This message has been edited by Master (08-11-2002 05:24 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-11 05:35 PM


This is beautiful. I am so glad that you reposted it. I enjoyed it very much.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-11 06:29 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Andrey, I can feel your hearts pleading in your poem, I believe love is all we need to be happy and I wish this to come to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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