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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-11 02:24 PM




What season is this that breaks the pattern
leaving life so torn and scattered,
taking me to places strange
I'm not sure I like this change.

Midnight broken, the dark ripped through
with soft words spoken "I love you".
Where is the wall that surrounds my heart?
What season is this that's off the charts?

My hands, my lust, my sexual heat
round and round to passion's beat,
lost I am, unable to return
as inside loves fire burns.

What season is  this that sweeps me away
in lusts overwhelming tidal wave
uncertain as my pleasure rules
in the distance again, "I love you".

WhiteRose





In truth, what defines us is our poetry.


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-11-2002 03:49 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-11 03:41 PM


WhiteRose
I found this a lovely poem but hard to read the script.

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-08-11 03:47 PM


Thank you for telling me. I thought it was just on my computer. I liked the script but it seemed so small and when I enlarged it from 4 to 5 it leapt out at me. I won't use it anymore since it seems too hard to get just right. Glad you liked the poem though.
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3 posted 2002-08-11 06:06 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful sweet friend, such passion fills your words and a deep yearning also for the other seasons great gems, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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