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Melted Ice
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Melted Ice |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Melting Ice as water boils at the sight and feel of you tracing the length of me in cool heat. A hush, a whisper. A sound from the depths of your soul into my own, clashing of echoed sighs How long is forever you whisper in my ear as I smile, knowing you already know Forever I will trace the lace of you as your eyes in smile trace the lace of me |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Magnus, This is so romantic. You really know how to make a woman *sigh* In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Dang Barry! I just melted completely... my legs gave way and I heaved one giant *SIGH* Bet they heard me over in Detroit! Well, someone had better come scoop me up! ~Hugs to you sexy poet~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such wonderful romance, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Forever I will trace the lace of you as your eyes in smile trace the lace of me Oh this is so romantic, Barry. You are going to have all the women here swooning... better get the smelling salts fast! I heard Nancy's sigh all the way over here in Kalamazoo...and thats about 140 miles west of Detroit.... that was a LOUD sigh! ~ hugs for a beautiful poemLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (08-10-2002 05:13 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I went and took a *cold* shower.  In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry So sensual and beautiful were these words which certainly made me melt, as do all of your marvellous words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And where did this idea come from?  Now...go and find another... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Barry - another wonderful romantic poem from your pen/keyboard - just loved this - Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gee Sun, I think I was inspired. Now, let me see if I can remember where the inspiration came from???????? |
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heysara New Member
since 2002-08-08
Posts 8 |
That was absolutely gorgeous. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Your words are the flutter of love. You have carried me away with the gentle calling of: "echod sighs", and Oh my God, "feel of you tracing the length of me in cool heat". HOT,HOT. Loved it. beauiful write. SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-11-2002 12:12 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~SIGH~ Mr Romance at his finest! Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry A forever love is the best kind! (squeeze) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Par Excellence! My favorite passages: "as water boils at the sight and feel of you" and "trace the lace of you" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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