Open Poetry #21 |
Some Are Understandings |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Colorless, still, remaining a memory of summer and sun Tahoe cold as only the deeper recesses of the lake might be light-weighted floats grasping hand still waters never threatening except to a mother’s fear that was a summer though young, how young must it be to have an old soul thrive within that was a summer of hearkening, hearing, the first tremors of realize realize who you might one day be the far away mountains heard oh they heard oh they heard… though faint, the laughter of the soul skipped across the waters and in looking back there is now knowledge that there was looking forward from the beginning… the horizon was mine all for the walking even across the water… to all of the Women of Passions... who know me, and understand me... and walk with me... thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I will only say, I am proud TO SEE this lady we have all come to know so well... Her and her beautiful heart and million dollar smile. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang Karilea! Now YOU made Me cry. Think I'll go sit with the serene one. This is so beautiful...just like you! ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I just know all the ladies of Passions is going to love this as I also love it, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karilea you have no idea what this read means to me today... you have touched my heart with these words and I know there will be many others... It is with pride that I walk beside that wonderful heart..... and that beautiful face. So pleased to see this Sunshine. Bless you for the treasure. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I think I see some Sunshine today... I see her in her beauty, present and also in her beauty, past with her smile she lights these pages and through her words her wisdom speaks I walk beside her... proudly ~ happy smiling sunshiny hugs Lyra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for posting this and for just being you! This is beautiful, moving and it's begging to be a keeper. And hey! I finally know what you look like...you are one lovely and sophisticated looking lady!...so go ahead and strut your stuff and your poetic pen Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite exceptional. Enjoyed so much the wonder of this beating heart across the page. Best Wishes, ThisDiamond |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I love this so much!! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea It is easy to walk beside you...you always keep the pace with your heart. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm honored to just walk behind you, hoping to pick up any pieces of talent you might drop. *G* This is beautiful, Sunshine... and so are you! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
heck, I would walk with you if you didn't mind a guy checkin out your ladyness. I like the photo ms pretty!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, My heart is on my sleeve. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Perfect. |
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