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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-08-10 07:34 AM







Somewhere

There is a small area
Somewhere lost, now scattered
Deep away, in reaches unknown
When I was out searching
An understanding home

Guided by angels
Who gathered ‘round
Somewhere, perhaps, there…
Might still be, yet to be found
Traces of letters to angels that roam
Somewhere lost
In a somewhere once home

The lines once written
Of angels that breathed
Were left by me
In state of believe
Lines of encourage
Lines of inspire
Lines that are lost
To someplace much higher

Where are they now?
Heaven only knows
Those thoughts are but wind dust
In reaches unknown.


                                                                       ©Karilea Rilling Jungel
                                                                                10 August 2002

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-10 07:42 AM


look at YOU! all gorgeous smiles!

and yes...I think I know this place...

If you know Tolkien? and yanno ME? I have, from the start, called this place El Ron's--a play on Elrond's...a place of healing, deep in the forest of the saga of Tolkien--where the weary rested, regaining strength--a sanctuary where elves, hobbits, faeries, and all creatures could count on a reprieve from judgement--- for awhile!

hugs you.

Neeraja
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2 posted 2002-08-10 07:43 AM


This is so impressive Karilea!  It matches excactly what I am going through right now... "those thoughts are like wind dust... in reaches unknown"  Beautiful!!!

Love Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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3 posted 2002-08-10 08:14 AM


Absolutely beautiful my friend!  What a wonderful piece to wake up  to today!

WOOOHOOOO!!
Well look at this beautiful woman!!  
Hey!! That's our Sunshine with her sunny smile!
~Hugs~

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4 posted 2002-08-10 08:28 AM


Somewhere lies a heart of pure gold
Remembering those words once told
Somewhere within a kingdom above
Shared by angels, given with love.

Somewhere a woman writes with a touch
A touch so tender of somewhere such
Somewhere we all will sit and smile
For somewhere she walks one more mile.

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5 posted 2002-08-10 08:59 AM


Karilea~
I'm SURE it won't surprise you one teensy bit to know that I was just working on a piece entitled 'Letter From An Angel' ...

Must be that 'at your back' thing~
Hmmmmm~

May the 'wind dust' circle and catch you in soft surround~

This is lovely lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2002-08-10 09:38 AM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2002-08-10 09:49 AM


Karilea

As lovely as the sunrise this morning, with the gentle soft clouds turning gold.  Good to see pretty you in smile too!

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-08-10 11:54 AM


Sunshine - your pen writes well today. And thank you for picking up on those two lines in my poem. I need to edit it...

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (08-10-2002 11:54 AM).]

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9 posted 2002-08-10 12:16 PM




(sigh) This is powerfully touching, sweet friend, I love it, I believe they are safe in His grasp and as we speak are guiding us with signs of grace! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-08-10 12:52 PM


The lines once written
Of angels that breathed
Were left by me
In state of believe
Lines of encourage
Lines of inspire
Lines that are lost
To someplace much higher

You must be an angel, Karilea...
You seem to understand them so very well.
This is such a lovely write...
~ hugs from above and also from me

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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