Open Poetry #21 |
Somewhere |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somewhere There is a small area Somewhere lost, now scattered Deep away, in reaches unknown When I was out searching An understanding home Guided by angels Who gathered ‘round Somewhere, perhaps, there… Might still be, yet to be found Traces of letters to angels that roam Somewhere lost In a somewhere once home The lines once written Of angels that breathed Were left by me In state of believe Lines of encourage Lines of inspire Lines that are lost To someplace much higher Where are they now? Heaven only knows Those thoughts are but wind dust In reaches unknown. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 10 August 2002 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
look at YOU! all gorgeous smiles! and yes...I think I know this place... If you know Tolkien? and yanno ME? I have, from the start, called this place El Ron's--a play on Elrond's...a place of healing, deep in the forest of the saga of Tolkien--where the weary rested, regaining strength--a sanctuary where elves, hobbits, faeries, and all creatures could count on a reprieve from judgement--- for awhile! hugs you. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is so impressive Karilea! It matches excactly what I am going through right now... "those thoughts are like wind dust... in reaches unknown" Beautiful!!! Love Light and Happiness! Neeraja |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful my friend! What a wonderful piece to wake up to today! WOOOHOOOO!! Well look at this beautiful woman!! Hey!! That's our Sunshine with her sunny smile! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Somewhere lies a heart of pure gold Remembering those words once told Somewhere within a kingdom above Shared by angels, given with love. Somewhere a woman writes with a touch A touch so tender of somewhere such Somewhere we all will sit and smile For somewhere she walks one more mile. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I'm SURE it won't surprise you one teensy bit to know that I was just working on a piece entitled 'Letter From An Angel' ... Must be that 'at your back' thing~ Hmmmmm~ May the 'wind dust' circle and catch you in soft surround~ This is lovely lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea As lovely as the sunrise this morning, with the gentle soft clouds turning gold. Good to see pretty you in smile too! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - your pen writes well today. And thank you for picking up on those two lines in my poem. I need to edit it... BC [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (08-10-2002 11:54 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is powerfully touching, sweet friend, I love it, I believe they are safe in His grasp and as we speak are guiding us with signs of grace! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The lines once written Of angels that breathed Were left by me In state of believe Lines of encourage Lines of inspire Lines that are lost To someplace much higher You must be an angel, Karilea... You seem to understand them so very well. This is such a lovely write... ~ hugs from above and also from me Lyra |
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