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eggs again, hard-boiled... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Tell me there's a man alive who perceives the delicate intricate in map of crack-- a journey's egg of hard-boiled life understanding birth in shout... knowing there is life within a shell--a tiny vein of lark-- a freedom mapped within fine line-- tell me there's a man alive who could take the birth of me-- tell me there is life-- outside... "tell me." I'll kick me alive. * * * *smile? I just HAD to captilize the "I"....I wanted the empowerment, yanno? okay...I'll STOP NOW. not-bloody-likely...*  [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-10-2002 06:01 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And not bloody likely that they would ever know... and therein lies the difference... but I know...you know! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
see what I mean? *gotta chuckle* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yep! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now wait a minute!! Some of us do know how to cook an egg.......it's the shell thing that confuses us sometimes. Your look this morning is that of soft boiled instead of hard and it tastes good with my second pot of coffee. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Interesting analogy! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think there is no man who could understand any of us. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too am not sure there is yet in words such as these you always make these thoughts and possibilities come true! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Karen..... But... I am sorry to crack your pristine shell here... I have a husband who understands... He definitely understands that map and he can read it perfectly no matter how many cracks it may have... but... He is mine! all mine! sorry to be so selfish........ I absolutely loved your poem...its very special.   ~ hugs from hard boiled chipmunkLyra |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
serenity ...I love this. And I understand what you mean... DeaDiAmore |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
well, I am just StupidGuy and I'm sure my wife would share a knowing look with you but, I know a beautiful bird when I see one sunny side up, you scrambledBS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Boy could I get myself in trouble with this one. Men! That's all I'm saying. I delighted in the poem. It's enigmatically cute. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YOU said it ever so well serene one! Men don't know! ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, He is born of fantasy and the William Tell of wile. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
funny thing......there's this pain in me tummy...it seems to happen every 24 hours... HEY! um...can anybody here crack an egg? (gawd but I love you people...) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Tell me there's a man alive who perceives the delicate intricate in map of crack-- a journey's egg of hard-boiled life" __________________________ Girl, you can work any metaphor and make it your own...and even then, I relate. I believe it's Janet Marie who says 'mirrors baby' well I'm copying her line This is cool in it's scream for understanding and introspection. This is yet another keeper!Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, if you're cracked enough to come out of your shell, I'll have you for breakfast...are you fit to be fried?  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh...yearning to be peeled.... hugs all. Thank you. |
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