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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I know you want me softer, more pastel the loud bright of me is overwhelming less willing to be absorbed in your shadow. I am permanent in my refraction, like the rainbow unable to splash across your sky in anything other than what I am. Please accept my display I will not fade not even for you. WhiteRose 08/02 In truth, what defines us is our poetry. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-10-2002 09:17 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some people just need to shine! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And you do shine, Anne... Great poem.  ~ shiny chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  '(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may your love never fade and always glow like a roman candle in a soft summer evening sky! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Anne, this was a fine, fine write. It was not really benefitted by the colored font. (kinda like gilding the Lily) Unless, you just felt like sprucin' the place up. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To put a cloud before the shine of you would be an injustice to you and all who experience the joy of your words.. Keep shining... |
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