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LilTai
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0 posted 2002-08-09 08:14 PM


Blue Light

In the blue light
of a crescent moon
we lay
on grass that's just barely
tasted the moistness
of midnight dew

you lay on your back
facing the stars
but looking
into my eyes

I, on my side
face you
an arm strewn lovingly
across your chest
and my head resting peaceful
in the cradle of your arm

you raise a finger
and trace my lips
and i know in my heart
our souls just kissed

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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1 posted 2002-08-09 08:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, may you always share the splendor of the moon with your soulmate, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet LilTai, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-08-09 08:34 PM


nice love poem - a soft loving touch here - loved it Paul
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3 posted 2002-08-09 10:18 PM


LilTai
Lovely write, enjoyed.

alterego
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4 posted 2002-08-09 10:31 PM


Sweet, flowing, could almost feel the tickle of fingers on lips (but I'm getting too old for the sort of thing)

Nice write.

Sheila

Create something infinite today - Smile!!!

LilTai
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5 posted 2002-08-10 10:38 AM


Aww thanks you guys!! you're all too sweet.
thanks all for reading and the kind replies

   Tai


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