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Blue Light
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Blue Light |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Blue Light In the blue light of a crescent moon we lay on grass that's just barely tasted the moistness of midnight dew you lay on your back facing the stars but looking into my eyes I, on my side face you an arm strewn lovingly across your chest and my head resting peaceful in the cradle of your arm you raise a finger and trace my lips and i know in my heart our souls just kissed Tai |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, may you always share the splendor of the moon with your soulmate, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet LilTai, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nice love poem - a soft loving touch here - loved it Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LilTai Lovely write, enjoyed. |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Sweet, flowing, could almost feel the tickle of fingers on lips (but I'm getting too old for the sort of thing) Nice write. Sheila Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Aww thanks you guys!! you're all too sweet. thanks all for reading and the kind replies Tai |
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