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In Search Of Self
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In Search Of Self |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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He sits alone in silence As he views the world beyond Everything would be just perfect If he had a magic wand He stares out his lonely window As a seagull passes by How much easier life would be If he had some wings to fly He contemplates his future Wonders what life holds in store He feels so disillusioned While he searches his soul's core He'll pursue his search of self As he wanders down life's road When he finds his guiding light He'll unburden his heavy load I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (08-10-2002 06:13 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for the wonderful story and for the great poetry - I loved this - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue... Wonderful rhyme and flow. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, I cried reading this because this reflects my early life so very well, almost exactly! (sigh) Knowing that I have escaped the worst of this lonely feeling of bereavement I know it only takes alittle hope for all children to emerge and be stars! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have suchn a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....this could be a "she" as well as a "he".... Sometimes this is what we do.....search for that place that feels right...inside... Excellently penned my friend... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully written, Sue... We all need to search for our life's core and to find our true selves. When we do that, burdens are lifted from our shoulders. ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with Magnus Sue.....sometimes we're frail and searching for the right place inside! Great writing! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let me echo Magnus & Ethome... they said it best... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
And aren't there days when we are all searching for that magic wand. Excellent write....Hugs, Marti |
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