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LilTai
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0 posted 2002-08-09 06:03 PM



Let Me Sip The Tea..

You run
your hands down
my back
a hint of a smile
playing
on your lips

I can feel your breath
warm and sweet
like tea

and in that second
I wish to be

the lips
that sip the tea
the toungue
that tastes the wetness

and you move
closer
and whisper
"let me kiss you, love"

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

© Copyright 2002 LilTai - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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1 posted 2002-08-09 07:17 PM


And of course you did . . .
Enjoyed this.


S Arthur

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trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
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Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-09 07:21 PM




(smiles) Oh LilTai, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is sooooooo romantic, this sure is my cuppa tea, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet LilTai, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-08-09 07:24 PM


a very lovely tea party - this is a wonderful poem with so many feelings evoked - thanks I loved it - Paul
LilTai
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4 posted 2002-08-10 10:40 AM


Thanks you three!!

   Tai


Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-08-10 10:51 AM



How tender...
and romantic...

Yes!

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2002-08-10 12:39 PM


This has such a sweet taste.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-08-10 12:44 PM


Thanks for inviting all of us to your tea party, Tai.
It was so deliciously written.
~ hugs of yum

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-08-12 02:01 AM


You can sip my tea...James
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