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Soleil Tracings - 2
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Soleil Tracings – 2 It becomes the standing joke who will last longest when heat rises and tracings begin finger talk over pillows and silk shh-shing whispers and jiggling laughter afternoon delights going into the night… you say you will, stamina, after all… and I wink in delighted knowing, because it’s you who keeps going for more ice… while I? I just keep glowing…  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excuse me while I have to leave the comp. for a while.......my monitor is overheating and so am I.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Soleil...my my....warm enough for you? Or perhaps you need more ice? Another sultry, sensual write from you again today! Lovely, lovely, ooooooh yes! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The ice he brought to cool the brow as flames of passion licked his toes Walking in slowly, wondering how it is always her in the end that knows! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"and I wink in delighted knowing, because it’s you who keeps going for more ice… while I? I just keep glowing…"   Wow!!! Oh my gosh, now this sure felt hot, I need to go outside and find a cool place in the shade! (kiss on cheek) The passion of your words is always glowing bright, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thak you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
who will last longest when heat rises and tracings begin finger talk over pillows and silk shh-shing whispers and jiggling laughter afternoon delights going into the night ================================= Oh....oh yeah ... ya make a moth proud with this one...  and...to this and part one..I have to say... (IWIHWT) Must be nice to be this inspire poetess Noir  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoleilNoir~ I love the tease and please of the entire piece ... but this ...... 'tracings begin finger talk over pillows and silk' whispers my name .... Night-night~ I've gotta go practice that 'finger talk'~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
afternoon delights going into the night… you say you will, stamina, after all… and I wink in delighted knowing, because it’s you who keeps going for more ice… Wow...its hot in here, Soliel.... and we had just gotten our cool weather back for a while... afternoon delights going into the night… you say you will, stamina, after all… and I wink in delighted knowing, because it’s you who keeps going for more ice… afternoon delights going into the night… you say you will, stamina, after all… and I wink in delighted knowing, because it’s you who keeps going for more ice… Whew!!!! It was just so cool in here a moment ago... where did this sudden blast of heat come from.... It must be a power surge or this saucy poem!  ~ hugs and *winks*Lyra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil I've been told some stories about ice, even told a few myself...but coming from you here in this poem, the ice seems to melt. |
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