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siesta grievance |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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she sneaked softly away and settled for a car seat and a folded jacket but with her eyes closed she could not maneuver, couldn’t help visiting the present tenses the blunders from behind the future duties and all the might have been forgotten’s...she struggled seeking desperately to fall off the edge but reality being round, unfortunately has none she tried sneaking in without permission, focusing on anything but the center of her attention counting soft slow steps...one o’clock came before she reached oblivion [This message has been edited by jellybeans (07-12-2002 10:50 AM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating!!! Some of the lines in here draw the reader with their extreme intrigue and originality. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
mysterious images woven with pondering words - thanks for a great read - Paul |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
rofg...no mysteries here...I was just poetically trying to hide the fact that I am exhausted but got robbed of what could have been an hour of much needed sleep...rofg....glad you both enjoyed [This message has been edited by jellybeans (07-12-2002 11:55 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That lunch hour is just so SHORT! |
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