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. . . My glimmer . . .
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. . . My glimmer . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you are the gleaming that shines from within my eyes ensconced in my soul Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Enchantment sparkles in mirror of glimmering there, within your eyes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling man yet again the sparse beauty of your words conjures such images of soft and tender love. This is utterly uttelry beautiful I love it, and you knew I would, since you always write well that is a guarantee. What isn’t always guaranteed is the effect your words have and this brings a lovely warm glow to my heart. Positively wonderful darling man absolutely perfect I love it utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
This is very nice, but it seems like part of a bigger poem, I’d love to hear as you expanded away from the eye. Maybe you can write a bigger poem? P |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Elan ~ That was beautiful. I hope you post it  Marsha ~ OK, I'm perfect. I admit it! You've finally convinced me Virginia ~ Blue Kitty ~ I'm kinda "known" for my short, succinct writing. You can, however, find longer piece of mine in the archives ... if you wish to see some of them Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I've said it before.... and I'll say it again.... Interloper...NOBODY does it better!!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
your green eyes say go no reds are seen for miles we are good to go  (smiles) Couldn't resist, I thought of my sweethearts green eyes reading this, you write the best senryus of all, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nice poetry - well said - loved it - Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful... *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ And in the gleaming I shall come to know the soul Shining in your eyes~ Spark of fair poet Smolders in warm afterglow Forever embered~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy Lee ~ You're hired Noah ~ You are a gem Paul ~ I think your first visit to my work. Welcome and thank you Suthern ~ WHERE have you been? I've missed you around here Marge ~ Oh, how beautiful. Please post it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've just made my day... I thank you. *S* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
whispering windows simple satisfaction found only through your eyes |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Magic....your poetry...I always get that feeling when reading... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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