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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
 Poet Sounds She purrs low in childish delight, "Come sweet poet, into this night," then the purr becomes a hum of all foretold, of all to come "Come sweet poet, into this night, come and savor woman's delight..." Then the girl to woman blooms He, savoring flavors of the room in which she bends, he her dress to rend but then she holds her hand outright, "Come sweet poet, into this night" as she unbuttons her delights... Oh, if he's had one, he's had them all Still, enchantment, she, her stance befalls ‘Neath as shadows linger here, and so fair, she, with whispered care, "Come sweet poet, into this night," and he thinks, "it's different there..." She is but only woman born but when passions come to warm two become one in united light then safe is he that believes this night as shadows linger, quicksilver fingers, "Come sweet poet, with your might, and fill the shadows of this night..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is truly beautiful, Elan... I especially loved the imagery of the young woman coming of age.... it was even sweeter, that you made her a poet.  ~ hugs from a chipmunkpoetLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Elan...so nice to see you here! This is so teasingly sensual... a delicate soft summer read. Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is... a poet's delight...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So lovely!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
she is poet she is seduction she is woman born enjoyed this ms E |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The shadow knows how to fill the night with pleasure  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elan - very romantic write. I like this very much. Waiting to see more... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"She is but only woman born but when passions come to warm two become one in united light then safe is he that believes this night as shadows linger, quicksilver fingers, "Come sweet poet, with your might, and fill the shadows of this night..."  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love the bright light of these words, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful and speaks with passion, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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