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Incessant Drip.....
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Incessant Drip..... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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If only it would do something other than this rain... Perhaps.....a fluttery burst of lacy snowflakes falling in ~~heavenly~~ spirals ,floating dreamily in slow motion to a white diamond earth, or the pinging of hail upon a red wood deck surrounded by oak and pines. Or even if it were a cauldron of fog rising up from the valley floor like some eerie witches brew on Halloween. Anything but this pounding ,drumming incessant thrumming drip, drip drone... a torrential downpour from dark angry clouds with an attitude obscuring my lovely view of the sea This dreary rain Just keeps on reminding me far,too much of you and I. An older poem that I wrote a couple of years ago.... Poetry is: |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Or even if it were a cauldron of fog rising up from the valley floor like some eerie witches brew on Halloween." This is the very thing that makes the Gulf coast people look forward to Hurrican Season. We KNOW that change is on the way. Love this. and OH. *disclaimer* gulf coast people? grin...I am simply wiccan--I do NOT order the elements around! (serenity exits...not in charge of the weather...) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Please send some rain this way, it appears you have too much. :-) Enjoyed. There are a million messages, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
raindrops are days of lives some splash loud and blend some are obsorbed quietly some are just lovers eyes on our skin exploring secrets. a pleasure to read you here |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We have been in drought so long the earth's cracks need filling today it rains today is baptismal day.... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
smiles...I think that I meant for the poem to reflect the arguing going on in a relationship between 2 people...LOL The rain was just constantly hitting something and annoying to hear that drip just like the sound of the nagging going on..hehehe I am thankful for rain and thankful for all of you who responded to this silly poem with such graciousness..I suppose this shows me just how silly it really is... and hey! get some rain where you are at and find some fun indoor things to be preoccupied with  hugs to all, Cher Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-09-2002 11:20 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Cheryl, I'm so happy this was from before, sweet friend, this is wonderful yet so sad and I hope now loves joy fills you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a pleasure to read this poem - your rain metaphor is oh so powerfully used!!! Liked this lots - paul |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thank you Noah...yes things are much better now in my life. smiles.. Paul: Yes I see you got the metaphor and understand the meaning of this poem...I think this happens all too frequently between people..Maybe they might stop and think if they read this...I so apprecitate you, my friend, for stopping and commenting.You always say the nicest things. Poetry is: |
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