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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-08-08 11:11 PM



Fake ideals poorly calm
The faucet dripping of illusion
In a run-on world whose very breath
Is crumbling outside a bottled lullaby

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-08 11:14 PM


Insomnia is no fun. But it sure can be inspiring!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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Very nice, Kris...
May your faucet drip of beautiful illusions.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-08-08 11:47 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is excellent, I have insomnia usually when I yearn for something, though I don't have a bad case of it constantly I know that small piece of it and it too tires me! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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