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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Free-Falling ~*Marge Tindal*~ I have fallen free free to love you or not not tethered to the past past the element of change change in degree of latitude latitude matching attitude attitude rises in altitude altitude sets me free free-falling into you you set me free free to love love only you *Found some tiny thoughts playing in the sandbox* ~A little Poetry Workshop assignment~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-08-2002 09:54 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your artistry is showing!  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Can I go for a ride in your balloon? Pretty Please!!!! This is very impressive - words and shape. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...love the idea of being free to fall...couldn't be any better then that. (PS..talking about love here, not hurting yourself)  |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
What a wonderful display of artistry. You never cease to amaze me Marge!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thankee ... glad you like~ Marti~ You betcha can ! Hope aboard ! Thanks my friend~ MartieSis~ LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL~  Kris~ Thank you so very, very much~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul and keeper of the moons kiss this is truly beautiful the shape of course magnificent the colours utterly perfect, you know I love it. Now that is what I call a perfect blend of poetic artistry, no one but no one does these as well as you do. As I’ve said countless time and will say countless more YOU are talented, and gifted. That you share your gift so freely is wonderful, that you display your heart so perfectly is something that I really am thank for. Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful writing. I love it utterly utterly utterly. This is soooooooo you perfect poem I love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Marge! This is fantastic. I love to see your artistic work. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge - I adore this!!! There's an entire love story in this short, little poem! Cor |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
just beautiful Margie-girl... miss your sweetness with my coffee... noting to self...I must sneak to the computer while baby naps...  love you lady!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is a little gem! I'm so glad you are able to continue writing even in spite of what you are going through. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You took that meadow walk yourself and turned it into a beautiful free-fall of artistic loving at it's best. I do so love it when the shapes come out to play and you never disappoint in content or presentation. "nvwadohiyada" to your heart [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (08-09-2002 12:37 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You KNOW that I love this... I spent forty-five minutes, on Independance Day, watching a leaf in spin in a wind of approaching thunderstorm--it just spun and spun refusing to let go... For all I know? It's still there. The boyfriend/hub made me go inside. He said I looked damned weird from the bar, staring up into apparent sky!  but OH...I digress... this would look GREAT in Autumn colors, doncha think? *winks* love ya mom. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely poem with an absolutely perfect and very artistic presentation.  ~ hugs from the garden pestLyra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
As usual, very clever word arrangement to make your point........free falling with the right attitude would be great from any altitude if you wrote it! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words would be beautiful and heart-touching no matter what the format... but the shape and colors take a treasure to new levels... Poem and presentation are just wonderful. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I'm a little overwhelmed at the wonderful receptivity to this piece~ It really was just cavorting with wind-blown words from the meadow of my mind~ No pre-planned thoughts ... just releasing the kite to the wind, letting it dance with ease ... free-falling, as it would~ Thank you ALL~ MarshaLove~ Thank you sweetest lady ... dear friend~ Like I said to you last night ... I am just 'receptor' ... they come and I do my best to reel them in~ SweetSuzieQ~ Oh ... thank you dearest~ Corinne~ You read me well ... thank you~ Devina~ Gal ... you get here more often .. ya' hear ? I love you ... and baby makes another love to share~ BettyLou~ You know ... you kind of hit the nail on the head as it relates to this piece, I think~ When 'it' is out of my hands .... I must release it to the wind in the meadow ... with the little what-you-are-going-throughs tied as the kites tail-bows ... I feel them pulled up and away ... perhaps sloughed off on the flight ... returned to me in a serenity that beckons me to come play in life again~ Thank you .... thank you~ MarkB~ Yes .... as Grandma said, "Advice given ... is best taken first." You KNOW how the shapes surround me ... enveloping me in their splendor ... ahhhhhh, I fall free~ Serenity~ I would have known in a heartbeat ... that you've been there~ MAYBE your Independence Day leaf blew into my meadow~ ? ! Of course it isn't enough that you like it ... now you leave a blowing wind of inspiration !! Autumn is on the horizon~ (colors and all that razzmatazz~) Lyra~ Thank you sweet little garden pest~ ETHome~ *giggles* ... I've been known to be high on a poetic plane~  SweetSuthernSis~ I love you ... always with a thank you in my heart~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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