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Open Poetry #21

Visions of Loveliness

powerofthysword
Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA

0 posted 2002-08-08 08:39 PM

Anxiously I await the onset of each dawn
through the morning sun I see your face
reflecting within a star all it's own
reaching out to caress the warm feeling
I can only wish that you were really here
With every breeze that passes me by
I sense your voice whisper my name
wading in the pond of my innermost affections
it is on the not so distant shore
that I feel your presence ever so near

Throughout my life I have always been told
that a special someone just like you
would one day hear my melancholic cries
Someone who will wipe the tears away
giving me back my reason to smile
while opening wide my long clouded skies

The trail of your memories was intrepidly blazed
with hopeful promises of everlasting love
your images shine brightly within my mind
Although you may not yet be aware of it
your spirit that resides deep within my heart
casts out the emptiness and leaves it far behind

There are so many things I still want to say
to boldly profess my undying love for you
yet for now they remain somewhat untold
I know beyond doubt our love will always be
you have given me visions of loveliness
upon which I can embrace and forever behold

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-08-08 08:45 PM

This is a beautiful poem of love.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-08 08:45 PM

BRAVO!!! Awwwwww, I love the whimsical feel of this, sweet friend, there is much that remains lovely in this world despite all the tears in other places! (sigh) May love always make your life a paradise, this is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-08-2002 08:46 PM).]

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