Open Poetry #21 |
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Beside the Lake |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The water is deep and blue, The sky is a lighter shade Till the yellow sun is through, And the dark of night is made. Out of pines the moon rises On the water it shimmers, Then with sleepy surprise Calm disrupted by swimmers. With skin as white as the swan They invaded my retreat Without their feathers to don The cool lake water they greet. Only in youth are they bold, Dip in mountain lakes so cold. Gloom |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very pretty. I liked the scene this painted. ![]() ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is beautiful...i love this side of you...helen |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, skyshine, Just a bit of imaginary vista, from a place I was a while back, It might have happened, but didn’t. Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you. 1slick_lady, Glad you liked Gloom |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love the tranquil and calming feel of this, sweet friend, this paints a gorgeous picture indeed that is soothing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful.... are u sure this isn't a memory of you in the lake... who spied someone enjoying the view... would have been nice.... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Vicarious for you? Ok Vicarious for us too. But you did stir a chill memory . . . those high or northern lakes can be sooooo cold. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is a wonderful poem - I enjoyed the read so much - paul |
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