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Open Poetry #21

Summer's Reverie

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-08-08 07:04 PM

Summer’s Reverie

sun has stroked the feathers
to smoothe and thin
of four fine finches at the feeder
this day

no need to longer
fluff themselves
up in insulation
to remain the duration

of chill air
that resided astride
the hourglass
of time

for having arisen
this hour, again,
a tower of glow
head to toe

of summer’s shine
summer’s glee
summer’s cozy
reverie

©August 7, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-08-08 07:18 PM

VAS - a'hhhh yes summer, soon it will be over, but not forgotten...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-08 07:50 PM

(smiles) Oh Virginia, this is soooooo beautiufl, sweet friend, summer will be over soon but just the thought of holding it to our hearts can make us feel toasty inside! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

3 posted 2002-08-09 07:22 AM

so beautifully this flows...it positively glows

Bravo!

Sammie

^i^

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2002-08-09 08:48 AM

Suumers almost over, thank goodness! (I live if Florida).
Enjoyed your vison of summer...soon gone.

Deb

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-08-09 08:55 AM

VAS,
Delightful read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-08-09 08:58 AM

Summer is over too soon...
and we are left with the memories...
Lovely write Virginia.,
I enjoyed the way this danced down the page.
~Hugs~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-08-09 12:02 PM

Virginia, you ARE on a roll!
I love it

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