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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-08 05:19 PM


“ROMANCE OF YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I’ve heard your gentle voice,
compassion I won’t forget…
This special woman found,
of this I have no regret…

Delicate are dreams spoken,
as our words become closer…
Wanting to embrace you,
knowing you, being together…

More than just thoughts said,
spoken pleasures that might…
If you knew my embrace,
whispers of love into the night…

My promise, words of softness,
more I know will accrue…
Tender moments will be special,
my gentle romance of you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-08 05:20 PM


Oh Bill, another one to make a woman melt. Simply lovely. *sigh*

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-08 05:26 PM




Yay!!! Awwwwwww, you always know where to fit the romance in poetry, sweet friend, and may her romance always make you sing like the true bard you are happily! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-08 05:44 PM


Bill darling heart YOU are the most talented and consistently writer of excellence that I know. The way you caress and bend a word to fit your flow is incredible. YOU have to know I utterly utterly utterly love this.

Perfect meter, truly exquisite flow, this is without doubt one of your utter best.

Truly wonderful you are Mr Romance


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-08-08 07:03 PM


Mushy is right....you are....
Suetang
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5 posted 2002-08-08 07:15 PM


Hello Bill

The title drew me in immediately and your words burst forth into a beautiful bouquet of love and romance.  Your lady is so very lucky to have such beautiful words penned for her.  

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-08-08 07:36 PM


...*SIGH*...

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7 posted 2002-08-09 08:08 AM


Bill, this is lovely. I hope it goes as planned, and you have a wonderful romance in the works.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-08-09 08:45 AM


I knew this would be as good as the title!
Very romantic.

Deb

SmartChick
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9 posted 2002-08-10 03:59 PM


This is just beautiful, Bill.
WhiteRose
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10 posted 2002-08-10 04:38 PM


A woman could just spend all day in this place. This just overflows with romantic thoughts Bill. Simply lovely.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

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