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Gathering For Autumn
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Gathering For Autumn |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Gathering For Autumn ~*~ Summer days are ending, and cool days are beginning. Leaves will soon swirl around my feet in a colorful blaze of orange, red and gold. I can hear the laughter of children as they pounce on leaf filled pumpkin shaped bags, and see squirrels chattering to one another haggling over plump acorns. I can feel the warmth of apple cider sliding down my throat, and feel the golden heat from a fireplace tickling my feet, and the warmth of a kiss, that sends my heart afloat. Sometimes I think the heat of summer will never end, but would I want it to cease? No, I would miss the music of change, and the gathering of color filled thoughts. ~*~ BloomingRose |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ My goodness, lady ... this is beautiful~ I am not yet ready to give up on these wonderfully warm days of summer .... but will welcome Autumn in it's colorful coming~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply beautiful. Autumn is my favorite time of year. The time of renewal. You've captured it well. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ Thank you, I hope this inspired you to write something about Autumn. No one can fill the pages quite like you! Whiterose~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, yes I love the summer but I also love the autumn and always never wnat to miss a season in its usual cycle! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait for these days to come around, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ya know.......sometimes your poetry just hits a soft nerve of inspire and the following is a great example No, I would miss the music of change, and the gathering of color filled thoughts Now tell me that isn't a poem begging to be written on it's own. Such beautiful images in those two lines alone not to mention the wonderful ones spattered throughout your entire verse. I applaud you and BEG (hey...it ain't often I beg) of you to turn those two lines into one of it's own. Beautiful write and up to the top with this one. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
so glad I found this one before it disappeared saw it with your eyes thank you arthur |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
A beautiful painting of summers leave, very visual and colorful. Nicely done. Essorant |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very pretty. I love autumn, too.  You look inside my wild mind |
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