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Blue Kitty
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0 posted 2002-08-08 02:01 PM


You aren’t an umbrella,
So why are you standing there fella,
Blocking out my sunshine,
Why do you choose there to be
And why are you looking at me
What have you got on your mind?
Oh don’t bother flashing those pearly whites,
Move along down the beach out of my light,
I’m not a fancy shell you happened to find.
No I don’t need help with the lotion
And where did you get that notion,
Did you think the sun had made me blind?
So just wander off and go away
You are ruining this lovely day
Blocking out my sunshine.

P.


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1 posted 2002-08-08 02:03 PM





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2 posted 2002-08-08 02:06 PM




(big hugggssssss) I understand how you feel here, sweet friend, I hope soon the umbrella is removed from over your head and all the sunshine of joy shines upon you freely! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beauitful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-08 02:39 PM


Love your beachy summer surfy words!


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-08-08 05:51 PM


Blue Kitty - spending some time at the beach I see, nice write about it...

BC

Samantha G Kennedy
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5 posted 2002-08-09 07:09 AM


No I don’t need help with the lotion
And where did you get that notion,

loved this

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