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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Prophecy The hive has overgrown its bounds Six billion buzz in overt sounds. Laced within a lost intent Swallowed by desires vent. Taxed and tarred the gardens flair Much too ignorant to care Wallows in a self-deceit Generations will repeat. How many turns will break the wheel How frivolous the cake of steal How acid is the say goodbye How bitter is the end of lie. Time has set a subtle vend And not so subtle is the end Life will spring and start again But not within the time of men Life persists with change to be And will return from out the sea. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Taxed and tarred the gardens flair Much too ignorant to care Wallows in a self-deceit Generations will repeat." Good Morning Sy!  Wonderful metaphor, with the busy bees and repetitive tasks, I loved how you wove your thoughts into the wisdom-laced gem.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How many turns will break the wheel How frivolous the cake of steal How acid is the say goodbye How bitter is the end of lie. smiling here, I was gonna blame my mood on HORMONES!!! Okay. Let's compromise? IT'S THE MOON. Don't let my silliness lead you to think I'm unimpressed either...sigh. sy? yer gorgeous. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good morning my sweet Kit. I hope you are well and happy. That is my wish, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Good morning my gem of the east. May you walk a rainbow today and find a treasure at its end. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hard to pass up a Seymour poem as it is but to pass one up with the title prophecy would be a sin! "Time has set a subtle vend And not so subtle is the end Life will spring and start again But not within the time of men Life persists with change to be And will return from out the sea." There you go with that evolution stuff that you and I argue about......I mean in a good way! Nicely done as usual! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, I welcome all opinions, thank you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
convolution revolution circle of round to it's when it is time to again enjoyed your looking under things here sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but turn the wheel we do in style for revolutions bring the wile in all deep thoughts in deeds of men to turn the circle, again, again... you do keep me going in circles, my Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Appreciate approbation. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, As long as you circle back to me. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The hive has overgrown its bounds Six billion buzz in overt sounds. Laced within a lost intent Swallowed by desires vent. Taxed and tarred the gardens flair Much too ignorant to care Wallows in a self-deceit Generations will repeat. How many turns will break the wheel How frivolous the cake of steal How acid is the say goodbye How bitter is the end of lie. Time has set a subtle vend And not so subtle is the end ====================================== me thinks the dragons and dinosaurs will have their day  Your metaphored verbiage and word play is ever clever Stinkylove. You serve our lessons up in rhymes divine and sprinkle wisdoms rule to explain all the ways mankinds the fool. How frivolous the cake of steal How acid is the say goodbye How cool is the poets pen that teaches to begin again. WAAAAAY COOL  *winkiewinkie*  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...I promise! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you and good morning Tink. Well any morning is a good morning LOL. Shall we have some raspberry tea in our garden of pretend? Or perhaps a walk along the shore. It's been a while since we met and I'm starting to miss you. WWRS Sunshine, A promise is a promise. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart OH MY! You have to know this is seriously excellent writing stunningly well written the way it flows from beginning to end in such lyrical beauty. That you write exceedingly well everyone acknowledges, when you write and you incorporate the truth laces through with your perfect Seymour wisdom it is incomparable. You know on such a day as today, when my mind is here and then quickly elsewhere I need the stability and the assurance I get from the pearls of wisdom that you daily scatter for us lesser mortals to gather. When I have gathered enough I shall string them together and make a necklace, which I shall wear to ward me from foolish actions. Do you think your softly gleaming pearls of opalescence will look good against my milk white throat? Mmmmm if nothing else they will remind me to think before I act. You do know I utterly utterly utterly love this it is exquisite. Thank you for you, you are very special  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Seymour Tabin, Your name, sir, practically says it for me. I'd like to see more of your work, Mr. Tabin. Enjoyed, Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Seymour, I agree though it saddens me to agree, I believe that this prophesy is so very true but can only be inevitably caused if all of man is resurrected and seek penitence together! (sigh) We are all honeybees that knead honey to the heart of all life and harmony and I pray together we can work for our salvation! This is excellent, sweet friend, I love your morning reads, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, And a serious thank you for the wonderful comment. Jason, Thank you and there are plenty of poems if you want to look them up, Noah, Thank you y friend. |
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