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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-07 09:23 PM



Stroked

strokes of time
and ink of pen
and the kind
that soothes
the skin
did I imply
I was
impressed
did my ego
swim past
the rest
or weakened
vessels obstructing
movement slow
is it luck
or genius
bestowed


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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1 posted 2002-08-07 09:29 PM


you write so well and say so much and I enjoyed this lots - thanks Paul
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2 posted 2002-08-07 09:59 PM


Helen,  you are a lady that deserves to be
tenderly stroked in many different ways...

Nice thoughts here within....

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