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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2002-08-07 07:23 PM

Waterloo

The Lake called to you
that spring night,
floated into your open window
on stirrings of moonlight;
an irresistible lure.

Laden with rain and snowmelt,
she was swollen and expectant.
You rested on her banks,
mesmerized by her profound songs.

You spoke of this attraction before -
you had imagined her hands
reaching from the water,
and you almost fell then
into her embrace.

© 2002 C.M. Bailey

[This message has been edited by Corinne (08-07-2002 10:41 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-08-07 07:25 PM

So wonderfully descript Poet. Awesome write.
ThisDiamond

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-08-07 07:26 PM

This is beautiful. A wonderful read.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-07 07:28 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Corinne, this reminded me so much of the Lady Of The Lake back in King Arthur's Tales, how you can look in the reflection of the waters believing there is a magic reflection waiting to be cast! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-08-08 03:50 PM

I know this lake. . . I've swam in it a number of times. . . (or, is it swum??)

great work Corinne. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-08-08 04:19 PM

Casting imagery
is what you do best...
and I am never disappointed
when treated by the lure

of a poem

by Corinne...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-08-08 05:09 PM

waterloo
so you were doing your gi jane thing
in camo and breathing through a bamboo shoot
and this guy came up for a drink
and you smushed him with a big kissy face mug hug?

dug it Cor

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