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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-07 12:26 PM

oceanic moonbeams
dancing on whispering waves
kiss shimmering shore
sweet fragrant tradewinds caress
romantic summer evening

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-08-07 01:27 AM

A lovely, tanka!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-08-07 04:37 PM

it's easy when you're on that island. . .

but, I might be on my own island as well. . . great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-07 05:45 PM

I can smell the flowers from here. Thanks, CSKp.

"Oh you've got green eyes. Oh you've got blue eyes. Oh you've got grey eyes." -New Order

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-07 09:04 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I always dream of sharing a summer evening with my Joanna, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-08-07 09:06 PM

Lovely! Just lovely!!

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

6 posted 2002-08-08 01:33 AM

Thank you to all! and no it is not always easy just caue it is an island...LOL..it has the same ole stuff as anywhere else you may live when you live here and are not just here on vacation...I spent a lot of lonely time here as well...but I admit the ocean is quite inspiring to write about..
I appreciate each of you who have spent time on my scribbles and commented. hugs to all, cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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