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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-08-06 05:57 PM

Can not my love be found again
upon the green of meadow high?
Can not my lips once kiss when
I hear the sound of soulful sigh?

I wait beneath the window sill
to hear the rustle of the sheet.
I wait in patience ever so still
in spite of this throbbing heartbeat.

The fragrance of your smooth bathed skin
which comes upon the gentle breeze.
Spurring to want you now, not then,
a moment I wish to dare seize.

I love you dearest maid of my night.
I wait to see your flowing hair.
My tears of longing blur my sight.
My dear,I wish and want you there.

Till dawn does take away the moon
and rays become a path of shine.
I’ll wait my love, till call of loon.
When once I say thee will be mine.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (08-06-2002 06:08 PM).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-08-06 06:01 PM

So beautifully romantic Magnus ... such a melodic flow and delicate phrasing. This is a lovely piece to warm the heart.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-06 06:04 PM

Thank you Kit, your thoughts warm my heart.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-08-06 06:48 PM

Thy maid must be awaiting thee
or else a sorry fool is she.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-08-06 06:53 PM

Sandra, I hope so....standing beneath the
window....starting to rain....and now I
am getting all wet...Maybe she will give
me shelter, a warm towel and.....

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-06 07:16 PM

Barry - a very romantic write. YOu have done well...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-08-06 07:19 PM

Barry, you are a true romantic!
This is very beautiful!!
~Sighs & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2002-08-06 07:32 PM

Nice! Very romantic!

Deb

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-08-06 07:34 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your heart always echoes and susurrates the call of the loon in passion, sweet friend, this is lovely, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-08-06 07:37 PM

BC....flatter me, more, more....thanx

Nance....pleased you enjoyed....now
what perfume is she wearing?

Deb, thank you...I enjoy your thoughts
and your poetry as well...

Noah...thanx my friend...always loyal to us.

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