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Open Poetry #21
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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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0 posted 2002-08-06 03:18 PM


The troubled sky changed its complexion,
Appearing somber, sad and bruised,
While on the busy intersections,
Piano keys endured our shoes

And wailing notes were slowly oozing
From sheets of clouds torn to shreds,
But only street-lamps heard this music
And humbly bowed their metal heads.

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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1 posted 2002-08-06 03:22 PM

But only street-lamps heard this music
And humbly bowed their metal heads.

I really like this. It was different, and original. Great write.
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