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the edge (a work in progress)
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the edge (a work in progress) |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
at the edge of revelation as if upon a precipice my mind afraid to take the leap over the thought that lay before me instead, held fast grounded by insecurity. Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You leave one hanging with this work in progress... I think you ought to check out our Poetry Workshop, Jason... this month we are working with Free Verse and this, Sir, suits the form Very Well... good job! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) I agree with Jason, this is a wonderful piece and I know the Poetry Workshop will help you continue to develop your wonderful skills! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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