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Open Poetry #21

haiku, very much...

Jason
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since 2002-07-31

Posts 72
Macon, GA

0 posted 2002-08-06 12:14 PM

hidden in the sky
behind the sun's fiery light
stars await the night

evergreen forests
singing the songs of the pines
the nightingale heard

the wild side of life
between the heavens and earth
takes my breath away

covered by the snow
the land in winter's embrace
this bear hibernates

winter's course is set
in it's eternal measure
partaking of life

like stars in the sky
I await the coming night
bathed in Luna's light

wear the jester's cap
accepted at Royal Court
but I'm not a fool

here's a new haiku
I have written just for you
am I getting through

while I was reading
it set my mind in motion
reason without rhyme

(all of this came after I left the library yesterday, if only it had come earlier)

Jason Daniels

Practiced in the Art of Perception

[This message has been edited by Jason (08-06-2002 12:16 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-06 12:52 PM

Whether sooner or
later this I have enjoyed
haiku very much

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

2 posted 2002-08-06 12:54 PM

Wow, these are incredible. I love the nature theme. Truly some of the best Hiaku's I have ever read... and unfortunetly that includes mine!! Kudos.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2002-08-06 01:30 PM

Haiku, Senryu or whatever, these are fun to do and to read.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-06 01:46 PM

Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is a beautiful chain of lovely haikus, sweet friend, I love it, you paint nature so beautifully, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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