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lifeslight
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since 2002-08-06
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0 posted 2002-08-06 05:49 AM



As I sit beyond the life around me,
I can see my belonging to this earth.
I can see the earths belonging to me.
My emotional traffic is no longer there as I sit beyond my own mind.
The life around me is what I am.
The life around me is what I do.
Without this i cannot move, i cannot see, and cannot breath clean air.
As the beutiful life moves with my eyes,
i can no longer feel pain.
The sky has fallen and the falles sky has risen to its highest point.
We cannot go any longer without the life around us.
We are not here without the life around us.
We have no existance without the life around us.

Because of this, i sit and whatch the life around us...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-06 06:40 AM



Welcome to Passions, Lifeslight. Observation is key in writing.  We're looking forward to more of your observations.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-08-06 09:10 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Very insightful first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-08-06 09:12 AM


I've often done the same thing. Great work. And Welcome.

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Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-06 12:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Wow, this is a powerfully perspective debut, sweet friend, I love it and this speaks with a sincere tone of your look all around you, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired dby your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



Mya love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

lifeslight
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since 2002-08-06
Posts 15

5 posted 2002-08-06 04:14 PM


very warming welcome...i look forward to all of your writtings...its always been a passion of mine to get my mind off everything....im 16 years old and have a lot of emotions as most of you went through ...and this is how i express them
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