Open Poetry #21 |
Birthday Lamentations |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Go back-such age is not of me caricature of used to be never would I become this bent to order of establishment. I still see flowers in my hair without my glasses,they are there! My love is free and wanted, too please say happy days are not through.. I wear my peasant blouse sans bra a least I did in times gone far too bad it cannot stay the same it looks like dreams were only games. I still believe in peace, not war but then again, I find I'm for eliminating tyranny but how to do, and still be free? Please let me start over again I'd surely do it better then. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah such regret. You may be the only one here consistently sadder than I. And as such I can offer no advice, just condolences. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write here Sandra... and I know where you're coming from with my birthday being yesterday... I pondered a lot of these same thoughts. Yet, in my head I'm still that young woman in peasant dress, with a daisy chain in her hair. Have a wonderful birthday sweet lady. Peace!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, I understand how you feel, sweet friend, know deep down you will always be young at heart and the beauty of you will always reflect who you are, sweet friend, we all wish you the happiest birthday, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An excellent write, Sandra... I think we all have feelings like this from time to time, but I know that I would never want to be in my twenties again...except for the health thing... otherwise, I feel much happier as a grandma. I hope you do too... and...I sure hope that you have a wonderful birthday ~ Happy Birthday Hugs Lyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw you, you don't really wanna go back, do ya? You've still got it, lady. Happy Birthday, and? I raise my glass to ya. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I understand this moment you've captured all too well, Sandra ... much enjoyed your thoughts in this piece. Happy Birthday! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The mirror tells the truth... but the youth in my heart STILL SINGS! sing away, songbird! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How I love your writing ... it comes from the deepest parts of you. Oh, what I'd do to create happiness in your depths. The pictures you draw are stunning and true-to-life. Write on, Nurse Sandra Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
NO Happy birthdays Sandra? you wouldn't want to be young again imagine having to learn Logarithyms all over. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - one smile, it would be becoming, as would a flower in your hair... BC |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, you. Have a *happy* birthday, not a morose one. Sometimes, thoughts can get in the way of living. Believe me, I know too well. :p Mikey Said if I only could ... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks all of you. I am just introspective I guess, not depressed. Luv you all Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
introspective. . . yes. . . I see it. . . looking back with regret. . . or looking back in amber. . . I wonder where those came from. . . anyway. . . remember that you've gone this way for a reason. . . and that now, it's time to keep walking. . . and that the heart always knows. . . Happy Birthday my friend. . . there will be more. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do believe Sven pretty well nailed it. It is certainly OK to look back, but we should also look forward at the same time using our past as a learning tool.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sandra sometimes it really does seem we have this simpatico thing going on....this is sortah how I felt when I wrote recently wrote Crossroads. I decided looking back is ok, but damned if I am going to dwell on it!! Hugs and luv to you Sandra. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SANDRA! Oh, for the glory of the good ole days! Ahh, but were they really that good? Hugs, Marti |
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