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Windsong Whispered Sigh
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Windsong Whispered Sigh |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Windsong Whispered Sigh I hold this love inside for him. Yes, I'm sure he knows eyes of mine that follow all will travel as he goes into the shadows come each eve, I see his vision there. I hold this love for him inside and welcome him to share. I feel the last, his kiss of touch, though was a time ago. Remembering the soft, his lips the hard, the deepened flow of feelings bodied one to one, intensely but for this. I hold this love for him inside empowered by a kiss. The moments render me undone when ere approaches he. My heart begins to light in dance in wonders, what might be. It only takes one touch of kiss to wrest me in his arms. If only he envisioned such, I'd give in to his charms. I hold this love, a verse within that struggles to release, pressing 'gainst the heart of mine a poem that I piece together from the feel of him, a windsong whispered sigh. I'll hold this love forevermore in shadows, he and I. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
First, let me say that the title caught my eye - what a pretty title and well-used line. "I feel the last, his kiss of touch, though was a time ago. Remembering the soft, his lips the hard, the deepened flow of feelings bodied one to one, intensely but for this. I hold this love for him inside empowered by a kiss." This is beautiful in it's ache, it's longing, it's just so full of power. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Sweet lady .... what a beautiful write~ 'I hold this love, a verse within that struggles to release, pressing 'gainst the heart of mine a poem that I piece together from the feel of him, a windsong whispered sigh. I'll hold this love forevermore in shadows, he and I.' Delicately beautiful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A beautiful melody. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful Maureen! Te title at first reminded me of Windsong perfume... which put me in the mood for this read... and I was not disappointed... it is very well done. ~Hugs~ *Love the new pic!* |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Bring it to the light from the shadows. And good luck. Enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my,I feel the same way. You described it very well. Sandra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yes, bring this love now into the light..wonderfully woven  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully romantic, Maureen.  ~ lots of chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart this is simply beautiful, when you were writing this I said it was special didn’t I? And it is delicate as a cobweb it trails over my mind like a soft echo of love. I love it you know I do, I told you, did I not? That this belies your statement that your writing is without depth and passion this is superb writing simply exquisite. I love it utterly utterly utterly love it. Cecil B would be jumping up and down with joy as I am, perfect darling heart simply perfect   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write, Maureen. I love it  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful, beutiful I do believe Honeybee stole the words right from my mouth. Such a lovely, gentle feel to this! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - wonderfully romantic thoughts. As always... BC |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Very beautiful song of devotion, mellifulously penned! Wonderfully written piece GF! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Melissa~thank you so much for responding..some days my words have more power than other days and I never know when that might occur.*s M Marge~ I was in a beautiful mood I guess...either that or wishful thinking..~thank you~ hugss Me ThisDiamond..thanks *s Nancy, hmmmm I don't think I ever tried that..I pretty much stick to Shalimar..or Emeraude...Thank you for reading and the comment about my picture..I can take 4 pictures in one day and all of them will make me look different.. Hugs M RSWells..Oh I don't believe in luck anymore..I almost think one has to make things happen at this stage of life. Thank you M Sandra, well I was really thinking happy thoughts although many who read me think they are sad. hugss M Martin, it's there..just hides at times...and shows its face when least expected *s Thank You M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lyrs, Thanks ..I am hoping you will feel well enough to meet in the fall...I love your new little chipmunk figure...*s hugs M Marsha... "trails over my mind like a soft echo of love"..love those words..You are inspiring another write *s thank you hugss M Hey and Cecil B will be waiting for me at the airport HUH? You can always make me *laugh* I....nice to see you back again, hope you are feeling well. hugsssss M V~I am glad I touched so many with this one...always surprises me which poems get responses,Thank You hugssss M BC...I am trying to keep up with you and your romanctic ways...Thanks *s M Dulcinea..nice to see you here..hoping all is well...miss chatting with you. hugsssss M |
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