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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2002-08-05 04:23 PM

sunlight filters
       through a myopic lens
     casting the world as a
            convex impression
ocular harmonies
         blended by rods
                          and cones
make the spectrum sing
              in retinal halls
where the vitreous
       humor one another
              with focused tales

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-08-05 04:26 PM

Sven - you sure write well, yes indeed...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-05 04:34 PM

Makes me feel like I need to go see my
Optometrist........I need to get my
glasses....

Very nice Sir Sven....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-08-05 04:46 PM

Eye enjoyed this insightful write Sven!
Very clever, well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-08-05 04:48 PM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-08-05 05:59 PM

Holy Retina! Eye truly enjoyed this too, sweet friend, this is wonderful, you sure had me seeing through a contact lens for a moment, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-08-05 08:28 PM

I think this should be framed on the opthamologists office wall.

Sandra

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-08-06 09:32 AM

Sven,
If I could have read this I would have enjoyed it.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-08-06 04:55 PM

thanks everyone. . .

I was thinking about eyes, and sunlight. . . and looking. . . and the parts of the eye came into my mind. . . and the words just came. . . glad that you enjoyed it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2002-08-14 01:10 AM

hmm..all this labor digging your poetry out from beneath the piles deserves a reward, eh Sven Pen?

Ahh...I suppose enjoying your work is rewarding enough. Just why the hell are you at the bottom these days? Dontcha hate it when ya get ignored because you're not around as much?

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2002-08-14 01:40 AM

fascinating play with language...what catalinamoon said, too!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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