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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were one of the johnny bob boys in girl skin with fall down trophies where your broom stick pony bucked or an arrow pretended to kill your tree we didn't talk about ladies and their men then except when they were loud talkin' mouths with the yell buckets all moms and dads had and the stingy wallets that didn't know treasures the creek behind the lumber yard was heaven on summer afternoons when the fishin' was good or just swimming in cutoff jeans and tee's 'til yours got funny shapes and you were shy seemed afternoons were for soda shops then your knees healed into long lady legs and the creek was still heaven some nights when we bared our secrets in the water and talked about the ladies and their men . ©dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-05-2002 06:27 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Yes growing up is always difficult. And each is a play in itself. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and don't I know a flower girl and a tomboy who will be liking this memory... thanks for linking arms on this one... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And he made a daisy chain for her hair.. their tanned skin touching as he placed it upon her head. Love these memories Dark, seems like yesterday.. when the world was young. ~very slow morning hugs & a soft smile~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - you have written of memories well, and the style is excellent... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, humble thanks to you sir. Ms Sunshine, Good Morning coffee friend, a place I go often in my thoughts...timeless I think, thanks to you lady for the read and reply. Enchantress, Thanks to you hon, is a pleasure to have the birthday girl whisper by...hope you had a good time?? Bill, thanks for the review sir, you bless me with your comments and with your reads. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think we all have a memory place like this one. Loved this look at your growing up, hurtful and sweet. Hugs! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in exploration all questions become answers with taste of first kiss You are a personal time travel machine, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, always a pleasure to take one on a visit of daydreams, sorry for any sad sides to the mirrors. thank you for the read babe. ms Indigo, there is a place in our thoughts were we wear new eye days like this...where we are innocent and wicked in the same dreams. thanks for the visits lady, I appreciate you |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
tributary waters of growing up or together.. Great write D..takes me back to mud and muddy and who cared cares. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina. one of them places one would go to in the old truck and be don't care kids all over again thanks hon for the look |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, this reminded me of the 60's spirit and the times of ice cream sodas and cherry cokes and flower power! (big huggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You show yourself out in this piece DS!! Only YOU can ever be this perceptive from a male thought!! I love the way you tell so vivid from lips of remember... and a girl's changing...beautiful~~ brava cutie!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Just because I like it. Me |
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