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SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
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0 posted 2002-08-04 09:27 PM


Not Just Another New York Day

The clouds are pure white
The sun shines and
The sky is bright
How could anyone know
Where did the songbirds go?

Remember them
Their faces
Their names
With silent prayers, the people waited
and still the ashes fell
on twisted steel and concrete blocks
never knowing souls covered all

They are in the air
In every breath you take
In between the words you speak
on the curbsides of the city streets
imbedded in the cracks, laid to rest
on the sideswalks of New York

Remember them
not just another New York day...
c2002SimplyGold

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-04-2002 09:37 PM).]

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Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-08-04 09:50 PM


A perfect poetic description of that awful day, Electra...
Oh how well you've captured it.
~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2002-08-05 03:00 AM


we will all remember
Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 131
Kent England
3 posted 2002-08-06 05:36 PM


a heartfelt write

this final stanza finished with affect ...perfectly

"They are in the air
In every breath you take
In between the words you speak
on the curbsides of the city streets
imbedded in the cracks, laid to rest
on the sideswalks of New York

Remember them
not just another New York day..."


bless you for reminding us all


Sammie

^i^

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

4 posted 2002-08-11 09:13 PM


9/11

"There but, for the grace of god go I"


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