Open Poetry #21 |
Women Always Know |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
In the space of a second My world turned into your eyes Mesmerizing mine Quickly I said, “Hi, how are you doing” Without an answer I retreated back into my shell Since then my eyes have searched the heavens To find you before my lonely eyes In ever increasing side movements My mind played the tricks that needed you Sometimes seeing a hidden smile shine through Last night my dreams devoured you totally Today you seem to shine in a new brilliance Dancing on a cloud of my needs In one glance you caught me off guard Looking right into my heart It has been days now My dreams now leave me tired Turning and tossing all night long Awaking with you gaining my strength And in desperation I reach out To find a voice of an angel calming me In the comfort like I knew her forever In a brave moment I asked her out to dinner She blew me away with “I thought you would never ask” In a smile that sent me flying “I have been saving this for you” It was a piece of paper With a phone number on it After picking her up and giving her roses We had a meal of pure desires Intoxicating us for more In a whisper that sent goose bumps she said “I want you to do what you have been dreaming of “ Gasping in wonder she replied “Women always know!” Wrapped up in between two dreams The wildest night of fireworks Exploded before me Leaving me cuddled next to you Holding you so tender In a whisper in my dreams I could have sworn I heard you say “What took you so long For our eyes met long ago As I cast my spell into you Needing you so” D.Lester Young (08/04/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dancing on a cloud of my needs nothing I type could top that. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and sometimes everything a woman needs to know is right there in your eyes! What a tender, and very romantic piece this is...wonderful!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
D.Lester So I'm left wondering, if this was real...and if it is, who cast the spell on who..or does it even matter. Enjoyed this romance! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An enchanted moment...savored. Wonderful. ThisDiamond |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I am a romantic with the words to hold the dreams of my fondest wishes. Thanks ever so much. [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (08-05-2002 03:29 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat! enjoyed it |
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