Open Poetry #21 |
The Dance With You |
SweetSean18 Junior Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 11California, U.S.A. |
The Dance With You You walk on the dance floor, searching for a dance partner. I approached you with only a whisper of your name. The slow song played elegantly with others in the background dancing. As we started dancing, it seemed time stood still. Your warmth embraced closely for one last time. My sweat filled my face but you didn't seem to mind. You seemed like an angel that changed my life. It seemed as though I could have danced with you forever. You are a rose that is buried in a garden untouched. As I write you this, I wouldn't forget the dance I had with you. Thank you for visiting my poetry. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and I know how happy she must have felt after dancing with such a loving and special person like you, sweet friend, this is beautiful! This is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, I know how special a first dance must feel and I dream ever so much of dancing with my true love someday, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Sean, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, ooohhhh...and please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I believe you're going to like it here. Thank you for sharing such a special moment. Karilea |
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SilentStarWolf New Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 2 |
Awww, that's really nice. Reminds me of a similar situation. I'm glad you got to share such a special moment with someone who seems like a special girl. Love And Light, SilentStarWolf |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to passions!!! This is a truly beautiful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Yesenia New Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 1 |
hey you write so good. you put your fellings in it don't you? I care for u and your the best |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a special dance.I have memories of some wonderful ones, too. Nothing as romantic. Welcome to Passions. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SweetSean18 - now this had to be one fabulous dance with a very sweet partner... BC |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Welcome to Passions This is a great first post..I look forward to reading more of you! Tai |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
What a sensetive feelings..I feel u my dear.. Its avery great job ... looking forward to read more from u dear,, All I can say smile and good luck.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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