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*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
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0 posted 2002-08-04 07:09 PM



Moving On

Life goes on,
Even through the pain,
Try and let the madness,
Fall away like rain.

You think I don't know,
But actually I do.
I know the pain,
You must be going through.

This is the first time your heart has been broken,
But it surely won't be the last,
You have to move on to the future,
Don't get caught up in the past.

You must learn to love again,
You can't dwell on her forevermore,
You only learn from life,
Even though broken hearts may leave you sore.

You will soon find someone else,
Awhile later it won't matter much anymore
When one door closes,
Another must open; its for sure.

Remember madness is a cover for sadness,
It always works that way,
Just realize you must move on,
Don't do something you might regret later on in the day.

So please remember,
Life goes on,
The world won't stop for you,
You must understand, she is gone...

© Copyright 2002 *Sweet*n*sexy*0803* - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2002-08-04 07:22 PM


Life goes on, and I appreciate the thought and comfort that went into this piece...very well written.  And I see that you are new here, so I'd like to say 'Welcome to Passions'...we're so glad you joined us here!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-04 08:19 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh, this is so very true, sweet friend, I too send sympathies out to your friend and wish the best for those still searching from loss! (sigh) This is wonderful wisdom, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

*Lil*Blu*Eyez*
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3 posted 2002-08-04 09:56 PM


Hey! That was really good, but who was it about?
SimplyGold
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4 posted 2002-08-04 10:02 PM


This is so true. So many think that life is like a soap opera. Yes, the world moves on an so must you.

Thank you for the reminder. Bravo!

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-08-04 10:07 PM


The sadness of goodbye...though memories
seldom fade and die...Learning to let it go
and go on,  so hard...but not impossible...

A very compassionate poem,  nicely done...

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