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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-08-04 11:59 AM


He Will See

When you learn as a child
You can't even turn to your mother
When something bad happens
And you need her
Where do you go

He didn't come home all night long
At 10:43 am. he still isn't here
I won't go looking for him
Because he could be anywhere
Who knows

On my own I will survive
Lessons are learned very well
Observing all that he does
I can surely tell
He's on a row

The doors are fixed
Where he can't get in
Eventually he will come home
Not telling me where he has been
And, he'll have to go

I stand on my own two feet
There is no one here for me
I will stand my ground
This he will see
My heart has turned cold

By Sue 8-4-02



[This message has been edited by SmartChick (08-04-2002 12:03 PM).]

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Nan
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1 posted 2002-08-04 12:11 PM


I'm glad to see you vent your emotions, Sue - I know you're gaining personal strength through your written words. Keep it up, dear lady...
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2 posted 2002-08-04 12:21 PM


SmartChick
A good strong write, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2002-08-04 12:35 PM


SweetSuzieQ~
You stay strong ... it's gonna get better ... I promise~

Keep writing it ... I think that the ability to bring things from deep within to the surface helps more than we can know~

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-08-04 02:02 PM




(big hugggssssss) Yes, continue to stand your ground because I know so much is in store for you! (kiss on cheek) He will not let you down, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2002-08-04 02:48 PM



I stand on my own two feet
There is no one here for me
I will stand my ground
This he will see
My heart has turned cold


You stand on your two feet my sweet Sue
But you know that we're always here for you
You stand your ground
And eventually he will see
Your heart may turn cold, but at least you'll be free

It's a bit strange to say due to the circomstances, but I love your poetry Sue.
You're expressing your emotions in a beautiful way, sad as they may be.

Warm hugs to you my friend, I think you can use them.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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