Open Poetry #21 |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Real A girl can't help it if she's got Emotional baggage. She was born with the ticket And she has to go up and claim it. She'll tell you herself With a gentle dead smile These rotten fruits and shards of glass Can stain her hands alone. Every day her life gets A handful more dismal. It's hard to believe that Her hardships are true. It's part of her life. She's got to choose To ignore it and be wax Or to shout it out and be real. When life has set her clothes on fire She can only burn with pride. And when life puts her out in the flood She can either drink or drown. She swims and soars and sings And cries herself to sleep. And she dreams of painting With her crimson tears. When she wakes, she climbs on the roof And screams. "I am alive!" "I am real!" It's been hard for her to accept That people don't love her. It's the scars of her tears That drive them away. She has no right to complain, For she's alive. She has friends and something to eat. Right now she can ask for no more. The courage it takes each morning To keep on breathing-- It's amazing she has something To live for at all. But each day as Her heartache grows Her will to live grows stronger And she thrives as her dreams die. When life has set her clothes on fire She can only burn with pride. And when life puts her out in the flood She can either drink or drown. She swims and soars and sings And cries herself to sleep. And she dreams of painting With her crimson tears. When she wakes, she climbs on the roof And screams. "I am alive!" "I am real!" A girl can't help it if she's got Emotional baggage. She was born with the ticket And she has to go up and claim it. It's part of her life. She's got to choose To ignore it and be wax Or to shout it out and be real. [This message has been edited by elfin_tigress (06-15-2002 03:53 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ElfinTigress~ I think you just unapacked some 'emotional baggage'~ Very nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
When life has set her clothes on fire She can only burn with pride. And when life puts her out in the flood She can either drink or drown. She swims and soars and sings And cries herself to sleep. And she dreams of painting With her crimson tears. When she wakes, she climbs on the roof And screams. "I am alive!" "I am real!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this write.. and the volumes it speaks I work with women everyday who have not had it easy in life.... I feel it an honor to be a women .. we have such powerfull souls.. we don't only over come but florish.... ~~Connie~~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When life has set her clothes on fire She can only burn with pride. And when life puts her out in the flood She can either drink or drown. She swims and soars and sings I really love this, Tigress I have had to look at life in this manner many times during the past few years... We always have 2 ways to go and we can either swallow the lemons and turn sour or we can turn them into lemonade... I just love lemonade... ~ hugs of strength Lyra |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
"The courage it takes each morning To keep on breathing-- It's amazing she has something To live for at all. But each day as Her heartache grows Her will to live grows stronger And she thrives as her dreams die." i just caught my breath. a fantastic write. and boy-o, can i feel ya. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I feel the emotion in this piece. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
A very emotional write but you did an excellent job doing it. Awesome! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is an exceptional write from the soul...I thoroughly enjoyed this post! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
powerful, emotional, heart wrenching and utterly, utterly fabulous. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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