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Pain Unending, Pain Endured
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Pain Unending, Pain Endured |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dont want to love you anymore but I cant seem to make myself stop. This isnt how its supposed to feel, this desolation this emptiness this constant pain. Every day I tell myself this is the day this is the day I will stop, stop loving you. And I go to sleep each night hoping that when the sun rises, I can look at you and feel nothing. I dont want to love you anymore. I dont want to love you anymore. I dont want to love you, but I still do. [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (08-03-2002 11:35 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Paula, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope soon you can have the heart to go on and find what your heart truly desires! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Falling IN love is the easy part. Falling out?... ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings Paula...James |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Aww no I hate it when love comes to an end. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
If I truly loved someone and they could not return it, I don't think that alone would make me want to stop, even if in silence... Welcome home Paula... it's been a while since you graced us... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's the leaving that always. . . well done Paula. . . good to see you again my friend. . . there's more yes??? -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Paula, I could feel it, your words..for I have said that to myself many times...but it isn't easy and I don't think one ever really stops loving...they just bury it if they have to. *s M |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Paula,how nice to see you again. Sorry if you are in this poem somewhere, as it is a lonely place I also dwell in. Hugs Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling heart sister, you know my dearest friend, every single time I read you I’m left pondering how special your writing is. Not only because you plumb the depths of thought, not even that your writing takes my mind on a trip somewhere it has never been, no the reason your writing speaks to me so is that it stirs the recesses of my own soul. Brings forth images and thoughts that I might have pondered but didn’t have the courage to examine. YOU shine your light on them so well and I love it utterly. I’m hoping darling girl that this isn’t you and it’s just a poem, because you’ve written it so well it feels as if it is you. I can feel the depth of emotion in this darling heart and it aches simply aches with it all. Wonderful writing darling heart, be happy and be well. I’ve missed you sooooooooo very much, send me an email darling girl pretty please.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I sense a lot of anger but also a lot of sadness in this poem, Paula... Very well expressed. ~ hugs and tearsLyra |
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