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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-03 11:07 PM



I could look at you for long hours,
stretching beyond the bounds of courtesy
and daydreams,
noting every nuance,
the exact way
a smile smoothes
across your face,
every masculine crease
a temptation to touch, taste…

And your eyes……
bedroom eyes...
Ah, memory serves no justice
of your sultry amber eyes.
Long hours, I could look at you.
But then, we moved closer.

I could touch you for days on end,
trailing fingers over contours
of muscle well defined
slalom back, tracing
every detail so clearly in
fingertipped memory.
days, touching you….. days.
But then, we moved closer.

Oh, Lover, I could kiss you for months,
lips so warm, willing, hungry…
Pressing, moving, a whole participation
of lovers' sip and swirl,
wet whets wither want wavers
upon the precipice, plunging
down
down
down
till drunken on
roses red dipped and twirled
in ambered ambrosia.
Hours, days….months
I could kiss you.
But then, we moved closer.

Make love with me for years
and I will be not full
nor filled, yet ever still
reaching for you, wanting
your wanting.
Needing your needing.
Beyond words,but then,
we moved closer.

Lover,give me decades
to look,to touch,
to kiss,make love.
Decades.

And at the end of decades,
four or forty,
it will not be enough
Moving closer…..
I will not be finished
falling in love with you.


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-03-2002 11:11 PM).]

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2002-08-03 11:18 PM


"Make love with me for years
and I will be not full
nor filled, yet ever still
reaching for you, wanting
your wanting,
Needing your needing.
Beyond words,but then,
we moved closer.

And at the end of decades,
four or forty,
it will not be enough
Moving closer…..
I will not be finished
falling in love with you."
_____________________________

That's enough to make a sigh 'sigh'
This is a lovely, empassioned write...and of course, the romantic in me is keeping it!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-08-03 11:29 PM


I hope that this man has but half of your romantic inclination. He's a lucky fella!


~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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3 posted 2002-08-03 11:32 PM


"And at the end of decades,
four or forty,
it will not be enough
Moving closer…..
I will not be finished
falling in love with you."




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you and your love share this bliss eternally and find one special kiss of bliss each day, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
4 posted 2002-08-03 11:57 PM


Melissa: Hi wonderfully romantic friend!  I confess I am in love with love and do enjoy expressions of it...I am a sucker for romance. Thanks for your read and sweet comment on my penned thoughts

Wranx: well...I am hooked on romantic poetry and thoughts and music and films...LOL I guess it is showing lately you might say. aloha and thanks for your always kind words to me and for taking time to view my scibbles.

and Noah: you are a big smile maker ya know and make my day with your wonderful words and your smiley people..thanks for your comments
big hugs to you all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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