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Fire Of The Sun Rose (Duet with ThisDiamond)
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Fire Of The Sun Rose (Duet with ThisDiamond) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Fire Of The Sun Rose My love, my love, my rose of day. A treasure kept of one to stay. My love, my lady, I beckon thee. Bring to my life thy passions free. In crimson red, these cheeks in blush As blossoms bud in molten rush. My love, this language brought to peak Beneath the wing in sonnets speak My love, most dear, in speech I say I've loved thee well, from dawn each day. I shall to thee give all thy need. Outside I wait on lathered steed. Upon the mount of rippling flesh, entwined of fingers, dreams in mesh. My love, for you in sweet surround. In honored chord, two hearts are bound. My life, my heart, my soul to give, a spirit born for you I live. My walk does take to paths alone, a trail of one in hazard's zone. My life, in hand and open book. In freedom's consort, lost in look. My walk beside to take this way. A meeting of two minds in play. I walk the soil to share the night in life my love, below moon's light. The cosmos brings to you our star. A gleam of hope for us from far. My love, the night is but a veil. In whispered mists of visions pale. And all the stars unite as one in crimson red beneath the sun. To you a rose each day in love. I give this rose to say my dove, my gift of hope lies deep inside to share at end of journey's ride. Copyright 2002, Magnus/ThisDiamond |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful..... DeaDiAmore |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
An incredibly beautiful duet. Kudos to both of you!! Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a remarkably beautiful duet! Wonderful you two! ~Hugs to you both~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, you sure love making duets, you truly make a wonderful team, this is wonderful, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) And may each day be strewn before you with rosepetals upon that golden brick road to your destinies, sweet friends, this is lovely, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kathleen and Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gee... All this beautiful poetry and rippling steeds...I'm exhausted. Great write partner! Thanks everyone for your kind encouragements. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must say that I threw Kathy a curve by changing my part of the poem in mid stream.. But....she adapted remarkably well, and gave me a gem of a reply....A very gifted lady... Thank you Kathy... And thanx to all who read and respond.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such a romantic ride, you two. Well done! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Its good If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have found your soulmate in poetry, the both of you...you duet so well! Enjoying the camaraderie of two wonderful poets...thank you! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - excellent duet... BC |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
*sigh* so beautiful, so romantic...I love this duet! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
I believe the two of you have said it all. Great duet... Paul |
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