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DonFurr
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0 posted 2002-08-03 05:28 PM



Should I slow down and
take peek at the past
Am I passing over
a love that would last

There is so much
I yearn to give
Teacher and pupil
thats how I live

I try to look forward
ahead I do strain
Do I delude myself
have I lost it again

© Copyright 2002 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
janmew
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since 2001-10-27
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1 posted 2002-08-03 06:38 PM


Another good one Don. I think it's an age old question, in concentrating on the quest, do we miss seeing that the answer has been there and we have missed it?

Nicely written.

Jan

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-08-03 07:21 PM


don, don, don, you know that i know...helen
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-08-04 05:07 PM


I too, question the quest...but sigh? what else is there to do? Enjoyed this much Mr. Furr--I hope to read more from you...and now? hmmm...you've got me thinking...
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