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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2002-08-03 05:17 PM



Seeking only to give
and live past the pain
Longing to let my
love flow like rain
Wanting a companion
who yearns for my soul
To give anything less
would not let me be whole

© Copyright 2002 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
janmew
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since 2001-10-27
Posts 134
Canada
1 posted 2002-08-03 06:36 PM


Don, this piece is short but wonderful. I think it's shortness adds to that. It speaks a truly honourable message.

Jan

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-08-03 07:20 PM


and take nothing less...helen
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-08-03 07:45 PM


This piece is both wonderful in its brevity and content.  I agree with Helen, take nothing less.  Well done.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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