Open Poetry #21 |
The Search |
DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Seeking only to give and live past the pain Longing to let my love flow like rain Wanting a companion who yearns for my soul To give anything less would not let me be whole |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Don, this piece is short but wonderful. I think it's shortness adds to that. It speaks a truly honourable message. Jan |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and take nothing less...helen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This piece is both wonderful in its brevity and content. I agree with Helen, take nothing less. Well done. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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