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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Vacation was fun Vacation was wonderful Vacation in the sun How beautiful I went to the west coast Last Friday I just got back today But it was a blast I say I saw the Gulf of Mexico Walked the white, sandy beach bare foot Waded in the water As the sun set behind I got a few suviniers A dolphin water globe And a stuffed cat It was all fun What a wonderful vacation Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I was wondering where you were but I'm so happy you had a beautiful time, sweet friend, I love the Gulf of Mexico and some of my favorite memories lie there, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous vacation poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Definitely good. Such art should be published. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
It just all sounds so perfect. I'm glad you had a good time and nice to see you back. How is your kitty cat? Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - sounds as if you had a good time. It is beautiful there around the Gulf... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thanks for the peek. Wish I were there sounds great! |
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