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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-29 04:29 PM


Vacation was fun
Vacation was wonderful
Vacation in the sun
How beautiful

I went to the west coast
Last Friday
I just got back today
But it was a blast
I say

I saw the Gulf of Mexico
Walked the white, sandy beach bare foot
Waded in the water
As the sun set behind

I got a few suviniers
A dolphin water globe
And a stuffed cat
It was all fun
What a wonderful vacation

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-07-29 04:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I was wondering where you were but I'm so happy you had a beautiful time, sweet friend, I love the Gulf of Mexico and some of my favorite memories lie there, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous vacation poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2002-07-29 05:26 PM


Definitely good. Such art should be published.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2002-07-29 05:55 PM


It just all sounds so perfect. I'm glad you had a good time and nice to see you back. How is your kitty cat?
Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-07-29 09:41 PM


the_loner_23 - sounds as if you had a good time. It is beautiful there around the
Gulf...

BC

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

5 posted 2002-08-03 04:56 PM


Thanks for the peek. Wish I were there sounds great!
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